Eyes meeting
In a frantic crowd
And the awareness
That those eyes
Are the only ones
You want to get lost in.
Free words#7
27 Tuesday Mar 2012
Posted in my poetry
27 Tuesday Mar 2012
Posted in my poetry
Eyes meeting
In a frantic crowd
And the awareness
That those eyes
Are the only ones
You want to get lost in.
Barefootcinderella1 
A brief moment of mesmerization.. Amazing how such few words could have a profound effect on one’s mind and heart. This certainly did on mine. Beautiful piece!
Thank you. Quite simple words, in fact, but I’m glad that you liked them.
very nice – stirring subtle hints of romantic reflections
David in Maine USA